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CyberComa's avatar

Mac and Cheese, here in Canada we call it Kraft Dinner. True story, when I lived in Fort Erie, Ontario I lived right beside Kraft road where James Lewis Kraft began to build his cheese business before winning a patent for one in 1916.

Anyways, Good Story.

Gracie West's avatar

Wait a min....Scout's father isn't BRUCE?!?!?!!

😁😉

Gracie Autumn's avatar

Omg 🤣 I had to look this up! But wow! Haha I hadn't realized I did this!

Wendy Russell's avatar

OOoo, lovely work, Gracie! This would absolutely rock as a serial... hint, hint...

Gracie Autumn's avatar

Thank youuuu!

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

I never expected myself to become so caught up in a tale of alien love (or something along those lines). I thoroughly enjoyed this and am really happy that it will become serialized and I can follow at least some of these timelines. I appreciated Demi's willingness to be critical of ESA and enjoyed the growing chemistry too. Great story!

Gracie Autumn's avatar

Thank you! I’m excited to share more of this world with you ❤️

Norm DePlume's avatar

Thank you Gracie, I loved your story. Fate, love, KD, and Lorrokian Capulets. It's exciting to read all the different directions people are taking the idea for Loving the Alien.

Gracie Autumn's avatar

I’m so happy to hear that you’ve enjoyed. And I agree, it’s wonderful to see how many different directions this idea can take writers!

Nathan Daniel Hatch's avatar

Great story. I love this as a concept for a serial. I’m excited to find out whether we’re following Demi, Scout, or both. I really like the way you paint a more sinister picture of the ESA and leave the other groups or institutions more open-ended. Thank you so much for agreeing to contribute. This is such a unique interpretation of love and fate. I really enjoyed it.

Gracie Autumn's avatar

Thank YOU! I have plans to serialize this but it will probably be a more distant project. Again, I appreciate being a part of this!

Jacinta: One Page at a Time's avatar

I absolutely loved this. I particularly loved how you ordered the story, and how lots of bad things could somehow result in a good thing. I'm a hopeless romantic.

Right, off to recommend this to my pals.

Gracie Autumn's avatar

Ah! Thank you so much ❤️ Im a hopeless romantic as well. This story was really fun to write, it means the world to hear it was appreciated!

M.O.Stewart Writes Dark Stuff's avatar

This was wonderful! Great pacing and the chemistry between Demi & Dekril was great. An age-old, bittersweet tale

Gracie Autumn's avatar

Thank you so much! I thoroughly enjoyed writing this piece!