I also feel like you gave the characters each distinct enough dialogue so they felt like they had their own personality, while also feeling close enough to make it obvious that they are family and spend a lot of time with one another.
I love how unique this world feels, from the river to the volcano in Maude’s dream. I also really the conversation the trees have haha, they sound like a group of wise women. Looking forward to reading more!
I've been putting this off for far too long. Binge reading time!
I hope you enjoy!
Love when the plants started talking!
I also feel like you gave the characters each distinct enough dialogue so they felt like they had their own personality, while also feeling close enough to make it obvious that they are family and spend a lot of time with one another.
Excited to read more.
Thank you so much for this. Dialogue is one of my favorite aspects of writing. I'm looking forward to reading what you think of upcoming chapters!
I love how unique this world feels, from the river to the volcano in Maude’s dream. I also really the conversation the trees have haha, they sound like a group of wise women. Looking forward to reading more!
Thank you! I love the thought of the trees as wise women <3
Oooo, nice worldbuilding, Gracie!
Thank you <3
On to chapter 2! Can't wait to read more
Thank youuuu!! I’m happy to hear you’re liking it!
This will do me nicely thank you. I will read the others over the next day or two when I need a break and something to escape into.
Thanks! Im happy to hear you're enjoying. We all need an escape sometimes!
This was such a fantastic first chapter! I'm already loving the characters and the worldbuilding.