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Nigel Code, Author's avatar

In my unofficial role of roofpreader, I will point you in the direction of:

“Most of us aren’t,” Achoren replied, hoping that she would pry too much more.

I assume he would prefer her not to pry too much more.

If you ever do wish to turn this into a book and would like a volunteer to check and format it, I would consider it a pleasure. I can picture this river and these lands, and the people you write of, and it is a quite wonderful place to spend some time. It would definitely work as a book, much better than trying to remember one chapter at a time after days or weeks.

Thank you for another enjoyable read.

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So interesting to see their cultural differences play out!

I have a feeling the others from the raft are alive---but I wonder if their raft is still continuing down another course from the storm's disruption. At least they have an Akarellian to orient them

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